very nice
It's a wonderful composition. The instruments don't seem to have that full-bodied sound the piece needs, though. I'm sure all it needs is a little more attention to the EQing of each instrument. Also it would be nice with a little compression on the master channel, just to really give it that oomph.
It still deserves a 10/10 and 5/5 though, despite that slight production flaw as, musically, it is a brilliant piece!